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The Biography Pie

2/10/2014

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Welcome back to my journey of picture book biography writing. While you've been gone, I found ANOTHER descendant of my subject, and we talked on the phone for almost two hours! It was awesome discussing my subject with someone else more knowledgeable. 

While studying picture book biographies, I've noticed that they fall into two categories: a story about the person's whole life from birth to death or one part of the person's life. I'll call these options the whole biography pie or a slice of biography pie. 

As always, I like to look at great examples. What's better than a book that received two recent ALA awards for nonfiction? I purchased on Kindle A Splash of Red: The Life and Art of Horace Pippin by Jen Bryant, illustrated by Melissa Sweet, Knopf 2013. 

Opening line: On February 22, 1888, the town of West Chester, Pennsylvania, celebrated a holiday. That day, in that same town, Daniel and Christine Pippin celebrated the birth of their son, Horace. (This book uses the setting to begin.)

Description: Horace is a big boy who's a great helper, and he loves to draw. When he wins a drawing contest, he receives real paints and draws as much as he can. But times are tough and then there's a war. Horace is called away, and something happens that prevents him from doing what he loves best until... 

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Here are some things I learned about picture book biography writing from this book:
  • This is the whole biography pie. Hope you're hungry!
  • The text uses simple vocabulary and short sentences. Young children will be able to understand this book.
  • A refrain is used which unifies the different parts of his life.
  • Quotes are sprinkled throughout in text and illustrations. Dialog is not made up.
  • Horace's "quirk" is that he loves to draw and that he's big. There isn't anything negative about his personality. The book shows the struggle of trying to do what he loves best. The climax: when what he loves, he can't do and how he overcomes it. So I'm trying to apply this structure to my story as well. Someone loves to do something, but is prevented or told to stop, how can good still come out of the situation?
  • The clue words "one day" signal that a turning point in the story is happening. Go ahead, check a book and see if that's true. The beginning matter is stated, and then the first change in the story happens along the lines of "one day." "One day Horace saw a funny face in a magazine."
  • The story ends bringing the reader into the picture. "And if you stood outside his house, you might see him leaning toward his easel..." (don't want to spoil how he overcomes) So I'm going to try to include my reader as well.
  • Includes a wonderful historical note of more detailed info on his life plus an author's note of how the author connected with Horace, illustrator's note, back matter including where each quotation in the book came from.


I really enjoyed this book and learned so much from it. I hope you get the chance to read it. And here's a FABULOUS interview of Jen and Melissa on the making of this book. So will you be baking a whole biography pie or just a slice?

18 Comments
Kim Pfennigwerth
2/9/2014 09:58:03 pm

Tina - Wonderful post today! I love how you have shown us the different ways this book shows us the whole pie! I will be rereading it again with a different eye!

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Tina Cho link
2/9/2014 10:26:23 pm

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Enjoy your 2nd read!

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Robin link
2/9/2014 11:48:50 pm

Tina, I've been enjoying your pointers in this biography series. I had never thought about doing a pb biography but you're getting me thinking about it. I can't wait to read yours! Great post!

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Tina Cho link
2/10/2014 05:59:14 pm

Thanks, Robin. Maybe you'll come across some wonderful person to write about!

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Laura S. link
2/10/2014 01:22:04 am

Excellent post, Tina. Makes me want to try my hand at biography. In the meantime, I'll see if our library has a copy of A SPLASH OF RED.

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Tina Cho link
2/10/2014 06:00:00 pm

I hope you get to read this fine book. Your daughter will probably like it. Easy to understand.

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Todd Burleson
2/10/2014 01:25:04 am

Tina,
Really nice post today. I want to compliment you on the format; reviewing a book for insight on how to write/craft/form your own project. I think this is very effective both for us, the readers and for you, the writer.
Thanks!
TB

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Tina Cho link
2/10/2014 06:00:50 pm

Thanks, Todd! This is one of the ways I learn, studying the real thing!

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Genevieve link
2/10/2014 06:59:50 am

I love this post. How fun that you found a book you can apply directly to the technique you're working on developing.

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Tina Cho link
2/10/2014 06:01:37 pm

Thanks, Genevieve. I can only hope my story reads as well as this one.

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Patricia Tilton link
2/10/2014 07:12:52 am

I was especially interested in your post because I was talking with a friend who published her memoirs years ago about turning her story into a children's book. The information was very helpful.

I have a hard time posting on your blog because of the RSS system. Hope this goes through.

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Tina Cho link
2/10/2014 06:02:32 pm

I'm glad it was helpful! Sorry for the RSS trouble, but it did work!

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Tracy Campbell link
2/10/2014 09:02:53 am

Tina, I, too, am loving these posts. I've been keeping them for reference. :-)

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Tina Cho link
2/10/2014 06:03:01 pm

Thanks, Tracy. And u might like A Splash of Red as it's about a painter :)

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Jarm Del Boccio link
2/10/2014 09:58:28 pm

This is so helpful, Tina, for writing our NFPBs! It was good to see you at the archaeology Webinar last night!

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Tina Cho link
2/11/2014 05:00:15 pm

Yes, it was nice to see you live as well!

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Cathy Ballou Mealey link
2/11/2014 02:39:39 am

Our local library has a section devoted to picture book biographies. (I know - I am spoiled!) It is very interesting to think of those shelves in terms of whole pie vs. slice books. Well known, important persons like Lincoln, Washington, etc. tend to have lots of slice books for kids (ex. Lincoln and Grace: Why Abraham Lincoln Grew a Beard by Steve Metzger)

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Tina Cho link
2/11/2014 05:01:06 pm

Interesting observation, Cathy, that well-known people have more slice of life books!

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